Monday, February 20, 2017

A Creative Writing Prompt (from creative fiction class)

There is a room
Three characters
Electricity goes out
One looks for a light source
One gets scared
One falls in love with one of the other characters during the event


“I love you!” Ann blurts out, antsy for attention and comfort in return. Her palms hold the pacific, while her eyes attempt to blockade the Atlantic. She’s been planning this moment relentlessly, the need for perfect smothering her now messy house. All that energy…seemingly a waste. It was a waste.

And Johnny, he failed to hold back the water in many places, if you know what I mean. While the other two were obsessed with doing whatever they do, he nodded off. When the lights fell asleep, he shrieked. Panic attacks aluminate his insides, while they make his vision black. No pun intended.

Sparkles is quiet. She’s always quiet. When the lights fell asleep, she knew monsters wouldn't wake. Fear is irrelevant, and acts only as a catalyst for “be killed or fight.” She has no logical reason to do either.

Ann is melting through the holes in her seat, as Hurricane Failure erases all the progress she had made. What ifs take over…what if she bought flowers at that coffee shop a year ago, what if she held that one door open a little longer? What if what if what if. Fear consumes her, realizing she just lit a fire, and their relationship the victim. All she can do now is shake and rock and cry.

Johnny is still fighting absolutely nothing, according to Sparkles. She thinks he’s a drama queen, and she’s always right. In between swings and jabs he listens to Ann’s meltdown. His shrink says grounding is the best way to fight attacks. Ann becomes his ground, and from above he can’t help but to shoot a stringed arrow at her heart. It’s easy to fall in love with someone that brings you back from insanity, especially when they’re vulnerable. Sparky is annoyed with these two emotionals. Annoyance is a catalyst for action, whatever it takes to get away from it. In this case, the door is turning the lights on.

“I love you,” proclaims Johnny. Ann cries harder. Could these moments get any worse, or is it better?  At this point, her laughter and crying are indistinguishable.

Sparky opens the living room door, and light invades. She goes to get a muffin.  Johnny now has tremendous hope that Ann will be his. Ann sees her everything walk away, never to return. All that energy…seemingly a waste. It was a waste. Her life will be sparkless. 


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